A Monologue, By That Thing In The Parking Lot
Posted: December 27, 2012 Filed under: Whats left | Tags: life, Monologue, no i in team, photo, postaweek, writing, writing exercise, writing prompted by a photo 15 CommentsBack then, I was really something. I had purpose. Nothing moved without my say so. It looks like that time has passed. Here I am now, sitting in some parking lot, in the rain.
I made things work. I got things done. Now, don’t get me wrong; I’m smart enough to know I didn’t do it all. On my own, I was just something. But when I was part of something I’d keep the others in line and help them do their jobs. They did so much. We worked together, we were like a machine, we were a team.
They say that there is no I in team. That’s meant to say that none of us are more important than the ones who surround us. Here, alone in the rain, it is a little cold. There’s no I in team, but I’ve learned that there’s no me in that team anymore.
You’re looking at me like you don’t know what to say. Or is it you don’t what to call me? Back when I had it going on… no one knew my name back then either. People never even spoke of me. In my business, if they’re talking about you, they’re complaining about you. When things are going well, you’re invisible. Not a mention until the day I finally had a bad day. Things went wrong. People pointed me out and said I had to go. They knew who I was then, but now? Yeah, but now…
Now I’m wet and in the cold. There’s no I in team, there’s no quit in me. I’m made of stronger stuff than that. Recycling is big now. I’ll find my way back. When I do, I’ll slip into my new place in a new machine that I never really left.
What I’ve been through will make me better than when I was new. Still, it is kind of raw out here in the rain today, isn’t it?
A quick note – on my last reading of this before I hit publish it occurred to me that this reads as if The Thing was a metaphor for me as I approach retiring and changing careers. It isn’t.
I saw it in the parking lot, wondered about it, and took it on as a writing challenge. I’ve written about a thing in a parking lot before, but it wasn’t such a dark piece.These are just the words that came out of me this time.
I’m going to hit publish and go play disc golf.
Very enjoyable post! I love personification.
Hey, thanks! A little out of my wheelhouse, but I’ve got to try new things to grow.
Welcome to Blurt!
Thanks!
There’s a bit of bumper buried in a median wall here. Are you available to do a quick interview?
that bumper is an inspirational hero
I must say for a Writing exercise you picked choose well. Ambiguity at it’s best!
Er….”picked” was in the draft comment and it decided to stay though it made no sense at all. So read: I must say for a Writing exercise you choose well…. Carry on. Now to bed……….. for obvious reasons!
Thank you sir. Hope you got some good rest.
Tell the truth. Was it really sitting like that, or did you pose it (for artistic reasons, of course)?
Nope, that was the way it was. I haven’t looked this morning, but it was still there yesterday.
I was in that lot really early and it kind of stood out.
Kinda looks like a turtle, doesn’t it?
Now that you mention it, it does look like a turtle!
Extremely well done!
Thank you so much!
What is that thing? I first looked at this post the other day on my iPhone but couldn’t make out the image. I’m finally on the MacBook and I still don’t know what it is.
I’m not sure, I think it is a part of a truck suspension. If there is a parking lot that would make pieces fall off a truck, that’s the one.